I became familiar with this book Painting the Wind at a session I attended at the NCTE conference and immediately went home and ordered it. Rose Cappelli shared some ideas for using this text with student writers. I emailed Rose to make sure it was OK  to share her lesson with our readers in hopes that teachers can take it and make it their own. Thanks Rose for saying YES! Rose and her writing partner Lynn Dorfman have written several books (Mentor Texts, Nonfiction Mentor Texts, and Poetry Mentor Texts) filled with dependable classroom ideas that work well with a variety of grade levels.

After sharing the book Painting the Wind, Rose asked us to focus on this paragraph:

“Summer is here.  And the painters come back to the island.  They come on the mail boat with their paints and easels and bags of books and favorite pots and pans. Some bring their children. All of them bring their dogs.”

As we noticed the variation in sentence length, she shared another from Sarah, Plain and Tall:

“The dogs loved Sarah first. Lottie slept beside her bed, curled in a soft circle, and Nick leaned his face on the covers in the morning, watching for the first sign that Sarah was awake.  No one knew where Seal slept.  Seal was a roamer.”

The variation in sentence length that Patricia MacLachlan uses certainly adds to the rhythm of the text.  But just getting kids to notice something about an author’s writing style will not guarantee that the students will take it on.  Rose and Lynn often follow this plan:

Hook the students with a great children’s literature that invites participation.

Share your purpose – tell the kids what the lesson is about

Brainstorm – real life writing ideas

Try a model – demonstrate what you are talking about in front of the kids

Shared/guided writing – let the kids try it with a partner

Independence – have the students look for opportunities in their own pieces

This format echoes all those other “greats” who also write about supporting student writers– from Calkins to Fletcher to Katie Wood Ray to Georgia Heard.

Here is what Rose did next.  She mentioned a passage from John Henry by Julius Lester and another from James and the Giant Peach (where the aunts are getting run over by the peach.) Both passages have a long rolling sentence with lots of motion followed by shorter sentences.

Rose asked the audience as she does with her students, “What is something in real life that has that fast, fast movement and then all of a sudden… stops?” The kids brainstormed:  recess, various sporting events, getting ready for school, etc.

Rose then modeled a paragraph in front of the students, writing about a basketball player.  “Mark crisscrossed to the other end of the court dodging his opponents and dribbling the ball in a staccato rhythm as the shouts and cheers from the fans echoed in his ears. He made the shot. The whistle blew. Victory!”

I think you can see how brilliantly Rose’s lesson would entice students to want to take a look at their own written pieces to see if varying their sentence length could spruce up their writing. Thanks Rose for sharing your lesson idea! Be sure to check out Rose and Lynn’s new book on Poetry.

Recently I presented a session at the NCTE conference with Katie Keier and Kassia Wedekind.  We shared how we use storytelling in classrooms.  Katie shared how she uses stories within her writing workshop while Kassia talked about storytelling in math.  My part of the presentation had to do with having students reenact or retell stories from Big Books or books read aloud or storytold.  I also shared how I use storytelling in grades 3-5 to reinforce reading strategies.

As I used my twenty minutes to try to inspire participants to become storytellers, I promised them that they could click on our website and see a telling of a tale that is easy to learn.  Click on the video below if you would like to see me telling the story called “Sody Sallyrytus” to two kindergarten classes. Then check back in a day or two when I will post the other story I suggested called “Tipingee.”

(If you have trouble with the video, go directly to you tube: youtu.be/Gas_zzxh9DQ) The story isn’t really 11+ minutes long. I start by introducing my story candle and teach the song that the students will help me with.

I often talk to teachers about teaching FOR strategies in ways that students will take them on and use them independently.  One of those strategies is inferring. What’s important is not that students have to define inferring or even tell us when they are using inferring to help them understand texts.  The real point is that students do it!  We want them to read closely, go deeper than the literal level, see things that are not explicitly put in the text by the author, but are implied.  A variety of things can be inferred – the setting, the narrator, the author’s point of view, the underlying meaning of a poem, the characters’ thoughts or feelings, and so on.

I recently read a picture book that I thought would fit well when working with inferring — One, by Kathryn Otoshi — which I’ll tell you about below. Keep in mind that one aspect of inferring is to get students to come up with a theme or a message that the author is trying to get across with the book. The Common Core Standards talk about students getting the message of a text in 2^nd and 3^rd grade, and by 5^th grade, they call it “interpreting the theme” of a text.

I remember a conversation I once had with a second grade teacher, Steve.  He felt that his students could get the message for THIS BOOK or THAT BOOK (as it relates to the character or situation of that story).  BUT, he found their difficulty came when trying to generalize to a more universal theme – to life in general or to other situations in their own lives.  In other words, they could come up with the fact that Wilma Rudolph (in Wilma Unlimited) worked hard all her life and overcame many obstacles.  But they couldn’t extend that to a more universal theme of “hard work, effort, and believing in yourself can pay off no matter what gets in your way.”

The story, One, by Kathryn Otoshi has characters that are all colors. Green, Yellow, and Blue are all friends and have a good relationship, but Red is the obvious bully character.  Red picks on Blue constantly and in so doing gets stronger, bigger, redder, and hotter. The others try to reassure Blue, but no one stands up to Red, until 1 comes along.  1 talks back to Red and takes a stand that this bullying is not OK.  Soon the others join Number 1.  The story ends with the words, “Sometimes it just takes One.”

I wondered how Steve’s second graders would do with this.  After being able to come up with the message that worked for THIS particular book, how could Steve help them think more broadly?  Perhaps a teacher could ask the kids to substitute names for the color characters (not using anyone in the class’s name.)  Then ask them to think of something mean that one character could say to another.  Supporting them as they created stories about real children and real playground incidents might help them get closer to developing a more universal theme.

Could students in a 3-5^th grade class get even further?  Could they think of persons, like Martin L King, who started out as “just one”? Could they relate this picture book to persons from history who took a stand on an issue, started a movement that others eventually joined, so that major wrongs could be righted? I would be curious to know if this helped students understand that theme is more than just a word (friendship, bravery, honesty), but rather is something part of the big picture of life. If you use this book in your classroom, please let us know what happens.

I was reading a one-page article this morning where Brad Meltzer (famous mystery/thriller writer) saluted and thanked his ninth grade English teacher (Parade/Washington Post 9/30/12).  He was honoring this teacher because she believed in him.  She saw the potential in him for writing and made sure she set high expectations for him.  Notice in the quote below that Meltzer is not thanking her for teaching him a particular skill or strategy.  He’s thanking her for acknowledging, supporting, and encouraging him.

“The teacher who changed my life didn’t do it by encouraging her students to stand on their desks, like John Keating in Dead Poets Society.  Or by toting a baseball bat through the halls, like Principal Clark in Lean on Me.  She did it in a much simpler way: by telling me I was good at something.”

This short tribute got me thinking about how all teachers can make a difference in children’s lives not only by seeing the sparks in those students who have special talents, but also by believing and supporting all students.  We need to accept their approximations as they learn and grow as readers and writers.  We have to acknowledge growth and effort and not just high scores and accuracy.  We need to be sending messages to students, like Peter Johnston tells us in Opening Minds.… messages that say, “learning takes time and effort, so trying hard is valued” and “the more you learn the smarter you become” and “collaboration is important and success requires it.”

I am reminded this morning of Patricia Polacco’s stories of her struggles in school learning to read and write.  You are probably all familiar with her book Thank You, Mr. Falker, but if you haven’t seen the continuation of her learning journey in The Junkyard Wonders, you should take a look. In this book she has moved to a new school in Michigan.  Though she used to be considered “a dumb kid” in her old school, she hoped that she wouldn’t be labeled in her new school now that she had learned to read a bit. But much to her dismay, she gets placed in a special class with other students of varying disabilities. The teacher, Mrs. Peterson, define genius in a new way and as the story goes on, all the students learn to believe in themselves.  Don’t miss the epilogue where Polacco tells you about what became of those students in that class.

How are you showing that you are believing in your students this school year?  Do you only praise and value the ones who come to you already reading and writing?  Or are you looking for the sparks, the tiny gems in their writing, the baby steps, the growth that a struggling reader might be showing you?